Farley’s Friday: Who Needs A Toy?

Farley here,

My humans think nature should provide toys. Sometimes another human will bring a dog toy into our house, but mostly it’s up to me to find toys in the forest. Sticks are great, but even in the wilderness they can be hard to find.

Not in  summer maybe, but buried beneath the snow, they can be tricky to locate. I have  good nose for it. Finn waits until I find something, and then he wants it.

Farley and Finn

Mathew may have the stick, but who will get it?

Finn is fast, but I’m persistent.

Can you guess who ended up carrying it?

Woof Woof

New Year’s Resolution: Turn Your First Draft Into A Great Story – Feedback For Fiction

Happy New Year.

The holidays are over and maybe you’re thinking about your New Year’s resolution.

How about rewriting your novel by following the Feedback process? Spend more time on your passion and finish that awesome story. Being able to perform a structural edit on your own manuscript will ensure you create a great story readers will love.

In 2016 we kicked off our rewriting tips with:…

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Mystery Mondays: Nick Rippington on Being Persistent

screen-shot-2017-01-21-at-8-43-04-amMystery Thriller Week is an annual event that celebrates the Mystery, Thriller genre. Welcome to all writers, published or unpublished. The Kickoff begins Feb.12-19, 2017!

Mystery Mondays is helping celebrate by hosting mystery writers leading up to this exciting week. The first up is Nick Rippington.

Being Persistent by Nick Rippington

MY OFFICE was a crime scene. I envisaged my computer cordoned off by yellow and black tape, the words DO NOT CROSS boldly emblazoned on it, hinting at torturous punishments if the message wasn’t heeded.

In my over-active imagination I saw figures in white paper suits pouring over the contents of my desk, wondering at the significance of the fantasy football teams I had scribbled down in my notebook, whether there might be a hidden code lying dormant among the seemingly innocuous set of names.

I studied the building, its harsh lights glaring out at me amid the uniformed greyness of the docklands office development. Feeling like one of those Watergate reporters, Woodward or Bernstein, I waited in the car park for my contact to arrive, jumping within my skin every time an engine revved or lights flashed.

Eventually Jonesy arrived, handing me a black bin liner. Opening it, I stared at the macabre contents: a half eaten chocolate bar, some chewing gum, a box of staples, a pair of blunt scissors, yellowing paper – lots of it – boasting hard-hitting headlines which had once filled me with pride.

“Sorry about this,” he said. “No one’s allowed in the building. They’re trying to find a smoking gun, I guess.”

I nodded. Two years into my dream job and I faced up to the truth – I was out of work because of ‘crimes’ committed long before I joined The News of the World as a sports journalist.

Having been on holiday, I’d almost missed Rupert Murdoch’s announcement that he was closing the paper in the wake of a stories of celebrities having their phones hacked. A friend phoned to tell me and I would only believe him after seeing it confirmed on the 24-hour TV news.

I never set foot in the building again. For the first time in my life I had been made redundant, not a nice feeling when you have a wife and a one-year-old daughter depending on you.

I had always fancied myself as a closet author, but never seemed to find the time. Now, with Indie and digital publishing exploding on the scene, I decided I would give it a go. I went to conventions, joined author and publishing groups and worked out how to set about the task.

With more than 30 years experience in journalism I had plenty of material to fall back on and began with a simple premise: How would a big city newspaper hack handle a move to a small provincial operation? One particular character sprang to mind, a dyed-in-the-wool cockney who thought the world didn’t exist beyond the boundaries of the M25 motorway.

I nurtured this germ of an idea, grew it, had my original story critiqued and rubbished, went back to square one, hardened it, added elements of thriller and mystery, drew on teenage experiences of being a member of a “gang” and came up with Crossing The Whitewash, which I published in August 2015.

Sales were a slow burn but the key is not to give up. Though most of us would rather write than get involved in marketing, my recent progress with Facebook Ads has been highly encouraging, leading to a big surge in sales over Christmas and the New Year. I broke into the top 20 hard-boiled mysteries category in the UK, my name alongside the likes of Phillip Kerr, Gordon Ferris and Stuart MacBride.

With over 30 reviews across the UK and US, many of them positive, readers have suggested they would like to see more of my characters, so the prequel is on the way. I was hoping it would be out in time for MTW but that may be ambitious. It is with the editor now, will then go to Beta readers and finally to my wife Liz, a qualified proofreader (and very good, I must add; quick plug you can contact her through her website http://lizripp01.wixsite.com/heresproof).

During that time I have been lucky to make contact with some pretty successful authors. One of the best tips came from Kerry Wilkinson, who published his first books independently before success on Amazon earned him a 10-book deal with MacMillan.

He read my first three chapters and steered me in the right direction, telling me that dialogue was key, and to let my characters tell the story. Now, whenever I get writers’ block I write a conversation between two characters. It doesn’t matter if it never appears as long as it gets the creative juices flowing again.

Thank you, Kristina, for the chance to write this. I hope your readers find it intriguing enough to take the plunge and read a Rippington.

A Little About CROSSING THE WHITEWASH:

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Young football prodigy Gary Marshall and his best mate Arnie Dolan spend their teen years battling adversity and rival gangs on the tough London council estate where they live. Then a series of events occur with massive repercussions for both boys, forcing them apart.

Eight years later Arnie is desperate to revive their relationship and has a secret to impart he has harboured all his life.

So why is Gary hiding away in Wales as a sports reporter under a false name? And why is he so keen to let the past stay in the past?

Who is Nick Rippington?

2016-01-01-12-25-08-1NICK RIPPINGTON wrote his debut novel, the urban gangland thriller Crossing The Whitewash, after losing his job at the News of the World in the wake of the phone-hacking scandal.

Published in August 2015, the novel recently received an honourable mention in the 2016 EBook Awards competition run by prestigious American magazine Writer’s Digest. The judges described it as “evocative, original, unfailingly precise and often humorous” and considered one of the leading characters, gang leader Arnie Dolan, as “terrifying”.

The judge in the 2016 self-published eBook competition went on to say: “I was impressed with the development of all the characters, major and minor. Arnold is terrifying but never comes across as a two-dimensional villain. By the end, the reader can see that all of the characters have changed.”

A career journalist now working on the Daily Star and Daily Star Sunday while continuing with his writing adventure, in a previous life Nick was an Executive Editor at Media Wales – the organisation that produces the Western Mail, South Wales Echo, Wales on Sunday and Wales Online in Cardiff.

In his spare time he is a big fan of the England cricket team and home town football club Bristol Rovers. He has mapped out his writing story, from first draft to eventual publication, in his blog imgoingtopublish.wordpress.com

He is married to Liz and has two daughters, Jemma, 34, and Olivia, 6.

CONTACT DETAILS:

Email nickrippington@yahoo.co.uk

Website: www.theripperfile.com

Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/buckrippers

Twitter: @nickripp

Blog: http://www.imgoingtopublish. com

BOOK LINKS:

Available in Kindle and in Paperback from Amazon UK

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Crossing-Whitewash-Nick-Rippington/dp/1514362171

Amazon in US:

From Kobo at https://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/crossing-the-whitewash

Nook books http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/crossing-the-whitewash-nick-rippington/1122462405?ean=2940150913486

iBooks:

https://itunes.apple.com/us/book/crossing-the-whitewash/id1039407605?mt=11

Category: This is a difficult one. I am having a lot of success in the urban category with Amazon but notice you don’t have one. For now perhaps thriller or contemporary fiction. Certainly if there was an urban category I would place it in that.

Rewriting: Getting Your Point Of View Right – Feedback For Fiction

Happy New Year!

Now that the holiday season is over, are you ready to get back to your manuscript and rewrite it into a great story? Perhaps you wrote your first draft during NaNoWriMo in November and are wondering what to do next.

To illustrate how the Feedback app will help with your rewrite, I’m going to work through an example with Point of View (POV), one of most important elements of fiction for character. Having control over your point of view choices will enable you to rewrite a better story…

Read more: Source: Rewriting: Getting Your Point Of View Right – Feedback For Fiction

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Farley’s Friday: A Dog Selling His Ski Chalet

Farley here,

I think I’m moving. There is a “For Sale” sign at the front of my house.  You all know I live in winter wonderland, so if you’re looking for a ski chalet, check out the listing.

Farley covered in snow

Haven’t you always wanted to say “My life is Better than Your Vacation!”

Why not start here with this stunning FULLY SKI-IN/SKI-OUT, 3 bed, 3 bath mountain themed home backing on to Crown Land! Located steps from the World Famous Greywolf golf course at Panorama Mountain Village; which was recently named “North American Resort of the Year” in the 2016 World Snow Awards!

Panorama is also a short drive to the charming town of Invermere, legendary Lake Windermere, Hot Springs, more world renowned golfing and much more!

Not cool enough yet? Head away from the frey and find your own personal big mountain adventure in the Jumbo, Forester, Horsethief and Farnham Valleys; home of breathtaking glaciers and the highest concentration of 11,000ft+ peaks in all of BC! All this is readily available from your new “Home Base!”

You will LOVE the towering ceilings in the wide open living area with a never-ending post card views of the ancient Purcell Mountains! The large master with a walk-in closet and large ensuite is located in the bright loft and overlooks the living area. Find your serenity in the private outdoor living area which includes an enclosed area for your pup and a hot tub surrounded by rock featured landscaping and Forrest! The oversized single attached garage is perfect to store all of the gear necessary to properly take advantage of all the recreation in your new “back-yard!” Stop dreaming – The stars just aligned! Call Your Realtor Now to get the full run-down!

And if you’re a dog, this place is awesome. Check out my neighborhood friends.

The 3 Fs

They’re going to miss me, and I’ll miss them, too. But life is just one big adventure…

If you know someone looking for a ski chalet that also happens to be located at the award-winning Greywolf Golf Course, then please share the listing.

Woof Woof.

Mystery Mondays: Gwen Mayo on Co-Authoring

Happy New Year: Today is the kick off of Mystery Mondays 2017, and I have the pleasure of introducing Gwen Mayo, c0-author of Mullet Express. She writes with Sarah E Glenn.

Co-Authoring by Gwen Mayo

One of the questions I’ve been hearing about writing Murder on the Mullet Express with a partner is “How do you write with someone else?” The short answer is that I channel the Coen brothers.

Okay, so I just wish I could channel the Coen brothers. With seventeen films to their credit, they have one of the most successful writing partnerships in history. They claim that one of them does the first draft of a scene then passes it to the other, and he takes it up a notch. This back and forth continues until they both feel that they have the best scene they can produce.

What works for them doesn’t work for everyone. The mother/son duo that writes as Charles Todd spend a lot of time discussing their ideas and say that they can’t remember at the end of the book who wrote which line.

Sarah and I have worked out our own way of approaching writing together. We had to. Our writing styles are worlds apart. Sarah starts with whatever scene captures her imagination, and builds her book from there. Things get switched around a lot, and gaps have to be filled in as she draws the work together. I can’t do that. I start at the beginning of the book and write to the end. She thinks life needs a soundtrack; I want a quiet room when I’m writing. To team up on a book, we both had to compromise. I sometimes joke that we have a writing prenup.

Seriously though, writing partnerships are a lot like a marriage. You need to work out the plan in advance. Having those details in writing isn’t a bad idea. When a partnership goes bad, it can get as ugly as a divorce.

If you go into a writing partnership with mutual respect, cooperation, a willingness to discuss issues, and the ability to let the other person win disagreements that are important to him or her, chances are you will have a successful partnership. We try very hard to leave our egos at the office door. Each of us have books that are ours alone. Together we write in a different voice. It is not my book or Sarah’s book; it is our book.

What Does Gwen Write?

mmexcoverfrontIt’s 1926. The West Coast Development Company is staging its biggest land deal in Homosassa, Florida, selling pieces of a planned city to speculators who dream of a tropical paradise. Army nurse Cornelia Pettijohn takes leave to travel to Florida with her ancient uncle, who claims that he wants a warm winter home. When their car breaks down, they take the local train, The Mullet Express, into Homosassa. By the time they arrive, though, a passenger has been poisoned. A second murder victim boards the train later, iced down with the fish. Uncle Percival’s hidden agenda makes him the sheriff’s prime suspect. Cornelia and Teddy Lawless, a twenty-year-old flapper in a body pushing sixty, must chase mobsters and corner suspects to dig her uncle out of the hole he’s dug for himself.

Who Is Gwen Mayo?

dscf2897Gwen Mayo is passionate about blending the colorful history of her native Kentucky with her love for mystery fiction. She currently lives and writes in Safety Harbor, Florida, but grew up in a large Irish family in the hills of Eastern Kentucky.

Thanks for reading…

More Best Bloggers Blogging to check out … | Books: Publishing, Reading, Writing

I love getting up in the morning and finding little treasures. Today Susan Toy posted some of her favorite blogs. First, I checked out each blog I didn’t already know about, then I followed their blogs. What a great way to find new bloggers out there. Thank you, Susan.

Here’s her blog if you want to check out the list.

P.S. Farley is not sure about the cat blogging, but says he can deal with it.

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While it was impossible for me to have followed, listed, and awarded in my earlier post every blog I know of that is good, I didn’t want anyone to think they’d been forgotten. So here&#…

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Nano Hop Prize Winners – Raimey Gallant

Congrats to the 10 prize winners (so far) of the Nano Blog & Social Media Hop! A few of our illustrious prize donors are offering discounts on editorial services for Nano Hop participants, so c…

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TWO RISING STARS | Carol Balawyder

I can’t help reblogging this today. I got out of bed, grabbed a coffee and turned on my computer. I found this blog by Carol Balawyder with a review of Judy Penz Sheluk’s Skeletons in the Attic and my third novel, Avalanche.

I’m so honored to be listed with such a talented author as Judy. Today, I think I’ll just sit here and be happy for a while.

Carol’s Blog:

Judy Penz Sheluk and Kristina Stanley have both been featured in my series How I Got Published when they were both starting out – before they established themselves as the respectful mystery …

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Farley’s Friday: Happy New Year

Farley Here,

Happy 2017!

 

New Year's Eve. Bahamas – Version 2

Sometimes humans are silly. Look what mine made me wear, all because we were at a party. That was four years ago.

This New Year’s Eve I didn’t have to wear a costume, but I still got to go to the party.

Pretty cool that I get to go to parties with humans. Sometimes life is just a happy place.

Woof Woof.