Rewriting: Getting Your Point Of View Right – Feedback For Fiction

Happy New Year!

Now that the holiday season is over, are you ready to get back to your manuscript and rewrite it into a great story? Perhaps you wrote your first draft during NaNoWriMo in November and are wondering what to do next.

To illustrate how the Feedback app will help with your rewrite, I’m going to work through an example with Point of View (POV), one of most important elements of fiction for character. Having control over your point of view choices will enable you to rewrite a better story…

Read more: Source: Rewriting: Getting Your Point Of View Right – Feedback For Fiction

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Mystery Mondays: Gwen Mayo on Co-Authoring

Happy New Year: Today is the kick off of Mystery Mondays 2017, and I have the pleasure of introducing Gwen Mayo, c0-author of Mullet Express. She writes with Sarah E Glenn.

Co-Authoring by Gwen Mayo

One of the questions I’ve been hearing about writing Murder on the Mullet Express with a partner is “How do you write with someone else?” The short answer is that I channel the Coen brothers.

Okay, so I just wish I could channel the Coen brothers. With seventeen films to their credit, they have one of the most successful writing partnerships in history. They claim that one of them does the first draft of a scene then passes it to the other, and he takes it up a notch. This back and forth continues until they both feel that they have the best scene they can produce.

What works for them doesn’t work for everyone. The mother/son duo that writes as Charles Todd spend a lot of time discussing their ideas and say that they can’t remember at the end of the book who wrote which line.

Sarah and I have worked out our own way of approaching writing together. We had to. Our writing styles are worlds apart. Sarah starts with whatever scene captures her imagination, and builds her book from there. Things get switched around a lot, and gaps have to be filled in as she draws the work together. I can’t do that. I start at the beginning of the book and write to the end. She thinks life needs a soundtrack; I want a quiet room when I’m writing. To team up on a book, we both had to compromise. I sometimes joke that we have a writing prenup.

Seriously though, writing partnerships are a lot like a marriage. You need to work out the plan in advance. Having those details in writing isn’t a bad idea. When a partnership goes bad, it can get as ugly as a divorce.

If you go into a writing partnership with mutual respect, cooperation, a willingness to discuss issues, and the ability to let the other person win disagreements that are important to him or her, chances are you will have a successful partnership. We try very hard to leave our egos at the office door. Each of us have books that are ours alone. Together we write in a different voice. It is not my book or Sarah’s book; it is our book.

What Does Gwen Write?

mmexcoverfrontIt’s 1926. The West Coast Development Company is staging its biggest land deal in Homosassa, Florida, selling pieces of a planned city to speculators who dream of a tropical paradise. Army nurse Cornelia Pettijohn takes leave to travel to Florida with her ancient uncle, who claims that he wants a warm winter home. When their car breaks down, they take the local train, The Mullet Express, into Homosassa. By the time they arrive, though, a passenger has been poisoned. A second murder victim boards the train later, iced down with the fish. Uncle Percival’s hidden agenda makes him the sheriff’s prime suspect. Cornelia and Teddy Lawless, a twenty-year-old flapper in a body pushing sixty, must chase mobsters and corner suspects to dig her uncle out of the hole he’s dug for himself.

Who Is Gwen Mayo?

dscf2897Gwen Mayo is passionate about blending the colorful history of her native Kentucky with her love for mystery fiction. She currently lives and writes in Safety Harbor, Florida, but grew up in a large Irish family in the hills of Eastern Kentucky.

Thanks for reading…

More Best Bloggers Blogging to check out … | Books: Publishing, Reading, Writing

I love getting up in the morning and finding little treasures. Today Susan Toy posted some of her favorite blogs. First, I checked out each blog I didn’t already know about, then I followed their blogs. What a great way to find new bloggers out there. Thank you, Susan.

Here’s her blog if you want to check out the list.

P.S. Farley is not sure about the cat blogging, but says he can deal with it.

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Farley’s Friday: Happy New Year

Farley Here,

Happy 2017!

 

New Year's Eve. Bahamas – Version 2

Sometimes humans are silly. Look what mine made me wear, all because we were at a party. That was four years ago.

This New Year’s Eve I didn’t have to wear a costume, but I still got to go to the party.

Pretty cool that I get to go to parties with humans. Sometimes life is just a happy place.

Woof Woof.

Mystery Mondays: Year End Post With Rebecca Bradley on Google Alerts

Today we celebrate another year of Mystery Mondays. Thank you to the contributing authors who make this series possible. And thanks to Rebecca Bradley for rounding out 2016 and sharing with us a unique way to research a novel.

I’m looking forward to another year of Mystery Mondays and a wonderful group of authors to meet and learn from.

All the best to everyone in 2017!

dfw-rb-mtbb-cover-midRebecca Bradley, author of MADE TO BE BROKEN, is a retired police detective. There’s a little tidbit that should entice you to read her novel. I know that’s what I thought when I read her bio.

Before we get to Rebecca’s post, let me tell you a bit about her novel.

A rising death toll. A city in panic.

A young mother is found dead in her home with no obvious cause of death. As DI Hannah Robbins and her team investigate, it soon becomes clear that the woman is the first in a long line of murders by poison.

With the body count climbing, and the city of Nottingham in social meltdown, the team finds themselves in a deadly race against a serial killer determined to prove a point.

And Hannah finds herself targeting an individual with whom she has more in common than she could possibly know.

Over to Rebecca…

Using Google Alerts For Research by Rebecca Bradley

Using Google alerts for research…

I hadn’t thought of this until I was talking to a woman who specialised in a specific area that I was interested in for my current work in progress.

I’d emailed Jo, informed her of my interest and we agreed to meet in London for a bite to eat and a chat as she had a lot of information I needed. This was me researching my novel. Meeting people face to face. It’s the way I soak up and retain information. Some people retain better by reading, some by listening (audiobooks) some by doing (tying themselves up in the backs of vans to see how it works and feels – I actually read about a crime writer who did this!) and others, myself included, take on board information better by conversing. We all have a different style of learning. (If you Google learning styles, you will find a whole host of information on this subject and you can even take a test to find out what kind of learner you are, if this interests you of course!)

I had a great afternoon with Jo and came away with lots of useful information that will definitely make it into the novel, but not where you’d be able to see it. I also came away with a great tip that I hadn’t thought about for continued researching as I was writing.

Because she has an ongoing interest in her field, Jo wants to know about all new mentions, in whatever capacity it might be, of her chosen area, so she has Google alerts set up. When she said this, it was a lightbulb moment for me. Why couldn’t I use this? For this very subject that I’d been talking to Jo about and for other subject areas within the novel! I would have all up-to-date information at my fingertips.

Google alerts are when Google picks up a mention of whatever it is you’ve asked it to look out for, anywhere on the internet, so, news articles and blog posts etc. and sends you an alert with the headline and a couple of lines of what’s inside and a link.

So, when I arrived home, I set up alerts for Jo’s subject and two other subject areas. A tip for when you’re setting them up; don’t just use the one specific phrase you might think you need, consider if it could be called or reported as something else and create an alert for that as well. Cover your bases.

One of my alerts is quite rare and I don’t get many hits. One of my alerts brings me hits every day, as it’s for Moldova, and I just skim read it. Picking out the bits I think I’ll be interested in. But, I’d definitely say it was worth doing because I don’t know enough about any of the areas I set the alerts up for.

Having already written two novels and a novella I’m wondering why I didn’t figure this out sooner! No amount of research will keep you as up-to-date as what is coming in through the news on a day-to-day basis. You could miss an amazing new breakthrough or a weird and wonderful titbit that could be the icing on the cake of an already promising work in progress.

Do you use Google alerts when researching? Is it something you would now consider doing?

Who is Rebecca Bradley?

profile-photoRebecca Bradley is a retired police detective and lives in Nottinghamshire with her family and her two cockapoo’s Alfie and Lola, who keep her company while she writes. Rebecca needs to drink copious amounts of tea to function throughout the day and if she could, she would survive on a diet of tea and cake while committing murder on a regular basis.

Feedback For Fiction | Self-Evaluating Scene Endings and Novel Structure

Self-Evaluating Scene Endings and Novel Structure

Imagine sitting on a plane next to a man reading your novel. You watch him read. He gets to the end of a scene and quickly turns the page to the next scene. He does this for hours. You watch the entire time, thrilled that he just keeps reading. He doesn’t take a moment to talk to you, to eat, or to drink. The TV shows and movies aren’t enough to draw him away from your book.

Isn’t this what we all want?

Read More and find out how to create great scene endings at: Feedback For Fiction | Self-Evaluating Scene Endings and Novel Structure

Farley’s Friday: I Found My Human

Farley here,

I’m playing in the snow, sniffing for hidden treasure, when I smell her. I know she’s close. I lift my head, alert to any sounds.

Her scent is strong now, and I break into a run. I’m too excited to think. She’s been gone for so long, I can hardly believe she’s in the neighborhood again.

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Now I see her, and burst toward her. I feel true happiness. My human is back. I have no idea where she’s been, and all I want now is a cuddle.

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I drag her home and sit on her. I’m not letting her go. Kristina is my human.

Kristina and Farley

Woof Woof

Final Day for Sale of Stone Mountain Mysteries

Are you still looking for a gift for yourself?  Maybe you deserve a little down time during the crazy holiday season? Imajin Books is here to help.

Imajin Books (check out their full listing at http://www.Imajinbooks.com) are on sale for the final day today.

But closer to my heart…All three Stone Mountain Mysteries are on for 99 Cents US.

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The Author’s Guide To Selling Books To Non-Bookstores is also on sale.

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Happy reading and Happy Holidays.

 

Mystery Mondays: Patricia F. Pagan On Writing In A Busy Life.

Welcome, Patricia F. Pagan. First, congratulations to Patricia on being a new mom. How she finds to time be a mom, write and work is a mystery..one and we’ll soon learn about.

Writing When You’re Busy by Patricia F. Pagan.

The first collection that I have curated since becoming a working adoptive mom, Approaching Footsteps, was published by feminist publisher Spider Road Press in late November. I am very proud and pretty gosh-darned tired. I am so pleased that readers are enjoying the four unique and suspenseful novellas, and I’m happy and that I am finally finding a path as a writer/parent of a young child. I have to beat back some tree limbs, and watch out for garter snakes, but the path stands firm beneath my feet.

Writers need time alone to create. Many writers are introverts. And, ask any parent, alone time gets chiseled out of sleep time. Whether at 5 am or 10 pm, it’s only when the kids sleep that mama is truly free to create. Taking alone time to invite the muse also means one has fewer hours in which to connect with other parents, a key to fighting isolation, and to getting tips for dealing with toddler temper tantrums in a quiet library. I met a writer and actress through my church who also has a toddler- and it has been great to commiserate in person, but also via email when we feel we need precious time to be alone. Other creative moms get it. They never say platitudes like “the days are long, but the years are short,” they empower you to take the time to write, because you’ll be happier, and then you’ll be a better parent.

In her recent piece, “For Writers Who Are Also The Mothers of Small Children,” Marcy Dermansky writes, “I want to hug every last mother-writer I know with a small child. I want to tell them it will be ok.”

It’s hard not to feel guilty when you choose an hour with your characters over an hour with your child. However, as writers, our words and tenacity define us. We are role modeling that creativity and doggedness matter. That stories merit time and attention. That fiction can be magic.

As long as I spend as much time as I can reading stories to my child, I know that it’s OK to take some time to craft them.

WHO IS Patricia Flaherty Pagan?

Patricia Flaherty Pagan loves writing and reading about complex female characters. She is the author of Trail Ways Pilgrims: Stories and the writer of award winning literary and crime short stories such as “Bargaining” and “Blood-red Geraniums.” She edited Up, Do: Flash Fiction by Women Writers. She teaches flash fiction writing at Writespace in Houston. After earning her MFACW from Goddard College, she founded Spider Road Press to champion writing by and/or about strong women. Learn more about her recent release, Approaching Footsteps, and her upcoming events on her website: http://www.patriciaflahertypagan.com. Follow her on Twitter : @PFwriteright

WHAT DOES Patricia Write?

Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000038_00068]Four compelling novellas add up to one suspenseful and entertaining collection.

Enjoy suspenseful tales with unexpected twists? These four compelling, unique novellas

by women will keep you guessing.

*Best-selling novelist Donna Hill spins a gripping tale of desperation and danger in “136 Auburn Lane.”

*Author Jennifer Leeper puts her own spin on noir fiction in “The Reiger File.”

*In “A Night with Kali,” writer & scholar Rita Banerjee blends a story of two unlikely allies trapped in a monsoon with a tale of murder and magic.

*In the historical novella “Brave Enough to Follow,” debut writer Megan Stuessloff tells the story of an interracial couple and the deadly price that must be paid for freedom.

*Editor Patricia Flaherty Pagan curates these rich narratives and the highlights of Spider Road Press’ recent flash fiction contests.

5% for Healing: Five percent of the proceeds from this collection benefit rape crisis and veterans’ charities.

 

Farley’s Friday: What’s A Cat Doing With My Human?

Farley here,

I’m still pining for Kristina. She says she’ll be home soon, but what does that mean?

I’m going to stare out this window until she gets here. Don’t get me wrong. The people taking care of me are really nice. They feed me, walk me, and let me sleep in their beds. It doesn’t get better than that. but I have a special connection with my human and I want her back.

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To make things worse,  look what I caught her doing!

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There is a cat on her lap. Really, that’s just too much.It’s bad enough I’m lonely. She better get home soon and explain this to me.

Woof Woof