Blaze – a review

Thank you, Roland for this thoughtful review of Blaze. it’s made my day , so I have to share it with others. 🙂

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Having finished two novels in quick succession last week, there will be two book reviews this week as well as my Insecure Writers Support Group monthly post tomorrow.

First though a review of another mystery novel that gave me some more insights into writing an engrossing and exciting read.

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Blaze (A Stone Mountain Mystery #2)

by Kristina Stanley 

Instead of exchanging vows, Kalin Thompson spends her wedding day running from a forest fire near Stone Mountain Resort, and the pregnant friend trapped with her has just gone into labor. Meanwhile, Kalin’s fiancé, Ben Timlin, hangs from the rafters of a burning building, fighting for his life. Can the situation get any hotter?

When the fire is declared as arson, finding the firebug responsible becomes Kalin’s personal mission. In the course of her investigation as Director of Security, she discovers that some people will go to extreme measures to keep…

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RAVEN LAKE flies tomorrow!

Today is the last day to book a 99¢ pre-order of RAVEN LAKE. The third Pat Tierney mystery will be released tomorrow, June 1! And tomorrow I’ll start my whirlwind seven-day blog tour. Here’s my ske…

Congrats to Rosemary McCracken!  Her new books releases today and I can’t wait to read it. Source: RAVEN LAKE flies tomorrow!

Mystery Mondays: Tracy L. Ward on Dreamers, Wishers and Do-ers

Today on Mystery Mondays, we welcome Tracy L. Ward, author of PRAYERS FOR THE DYING. Both Tracy and I graduate from the Humber School for Writers, so I thought they deserved a little shout out.

If you’re thinking of writing a novel, this is the post for you!

Dreamers, Wishers and Do-ers by Tracy Ward.

There are a lot of great writers out there, and I mean A LOT.

I’m not talking about the Dan Browns or Diana Gabaldons of the world. Everyone knows them. Readers everywhere buy their books and praise their abilities. There’s no question that these A-list authors have made their mark on the book industry. I’m also not talking about the mid-list authors either. The lesser known, but still lovingly followed, authors who never seem to disappoint as they produce fabulous books of note and stellar characters we readers want to hear from again and again.

Today I want to talk about the writers who have never been published. The ones who have never gotten passed the first few chapters. The writers who have never progressed passed the idea stage. The dreamers. The wishers. The would-be authors.

As an established writer I meet people all the time who tell me they have always dreamed of being an author. They tell me it’s been a dream of theirs since they were a child. They’ve had an idea in their head for years but have struggled to get it out onto paper.

Recently, I’ve been helping my thirteen-year-old son, who struggles with writing as well. He’s an avid reader and is a pretty good speller, but his sentences, his stories, his descriptive writing are all below his grade level. I’ve noticed how he clams up when we sit down to do his school work. Suddenly, with a notebook in front of him, his normally chatty self has run out of words. I think I’ve narrowed down the culprit.

Fear.

Like the would-be authors, my son is afraid of making a mistake. He’s afraid of looking foolish (perhaps more so because he knows what his mother does for a living). When it comes down to it, it’s not that he’s run out of words or that he doesn’t know what to say. It’s that nagging fear that tells him whatever he gets down on the piece of paper will not be good enough or that it will be wrong somehow. He’s doomed before he starts, so why bother?

Here’s why…A first draft is just that; a draft. Nothing you write is written in stone. Get used to that doubt. Say hello. Invite it for tea. Snuggle up to it on cold winter nights. It’s not going anywhere, so you might as well be friends.

Getting through a first draft is UG-LY. It’s like taking a look at a 2000 piece puzzle for the very first time. What the heck did we get ourselves into? Knowing this from the get-go, I force myself to write every day, 500 words minimum, until that puppy is D-O-N-E. I push myself forward even when that nagging doubt chips away at every word. By the time I get to the last paragraph my first draft resembles my weather-worn “Blankie” from my younger years. It’s misshapen and colourless with holes so big you can drive a Mack truck through them. It’s hideous.

So, what’s a girl to do?

Scroll back up to the top and start reading from the very beginning. Fix those sentence fragments. Erase superfluous characters. Give that antagonist a little more depth. Add a scene, delete a scene. Do whatever it is your book is telling you to do. None of this can happen without that first draft tough and that’s the truth. It’s an evolutionary process and it’s much easier once that first draft is done. That first draft is like the frame work of a house. It sort of resembles a home and there’s still quite a bit more to do, but at least now you know what the main structure looks like and you can better see what needs your attention.

So if you are a would-be author who’s dreaming of finally getting that idea out, my advice is stop. Don’t dream. Don’t doubt. Just do.

PRAYERS FOR THE DYING:

Small Prayers CoverDr. Peter Ainsley knew it was only a matter of time before London claims another murder victim, but this time the body is discovered tied to a lamppost four doors down from the house Ainsley shares with his sister and their bedridden father. The day the body is discovered, a maid of their house and Ainsley’s lover, Julia Kemp, fails to return home from errands in the city.

Convinced the body found in Belgravia and Julia’s disappearance are related, Ainsley follows leads that point him to an infamous bookman, Thaddeus Calvin, known as much for manipulating boxing outcomes as he is for his violent temper. Fiercely protected by the neighbourhood he extorts, Thaddeus is like a ghost, so deeply feared even Scotland Yard is unable to charge him for his crimes.

When another young woman’s body, a housemaid like Julia, is discovered floating in the river Ainsley hastens his desperate search to discover Julia’s whereabouts before she too becomes just another murder victim found in the Thames.

WHO IS Tracy L. Ward?

Author HeadshotA former journalist and graduate from Humber College’s School for Writers, Tracy L. Ward has been hard at work developing her favourite protagonist, Peter Ainsley, and chronicling his adventures as a morgue surgeon in Victorian England. She is currently working on the sixth book in the Marshall House Mystery series set for release in 2017. To find out more about Tracy’s books follow her on www.facebook.com/TracyWard.Author or visit her website at www.gothicmysterywriter.blogspot.com

 

 

Should You Do a Thunderclap Campaign?

The Thunderclap.it story continues. On May 28th, 2016 at 10 AM my campaign went out to 1,793,812 people.  Thank you to everyone who supported the campaign. Your effort made a big difference in my life, and I’d like to share the data from yesterday.

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Moments before the message was sent, my stats on Amazon.ca were:

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Later in the day, here’s what happened:

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That’s enough of an increase to make me happy 🙂

So should you do a campaign?

My campaign for was a non-fiction book, so keep that in mind. I’m not sure if it would be successful for a fiction book. I don’t plan to do one for AVALANCHE  when it’s released, June 25th.

Preparing for the campaign takes a fair amount of time. You must contact people personally when you first start the campaign. You need 100 people to support you for the campaign to go live. After I reached 100 people, I spent 3 weeks contacting others in my network asking for support. At the end, I reached out personally to all supporters and thanked them.

Time consuming – yes. Fun – also yes.

Would I do it again? Yes. But only for a non-fiction title.

Thunderclap is a crowdspeaking platform that helps people be heard by saying something together. It allows a single message to be mass-shared, flash mob-style, so it rises above the noise of your social networks. By boosting the signal at the same time, Thunderclap helps a single person create action and change like never before.

And a little secret…Imajin Books has decided to keep THE AUTHOR’S GUIDE TO SELLING BOOKS TO NON-BOOKSTORES on sale for a little while longer. You can still get a copy for $0.99 USD at myBook.to/SellingBooks

If you have thoughts on doing a Thunderclap campaign, please share your thoughts in the comments below.

Thanks for reading.

HOT NEW RELEASE: Selling Books to Non-Bookstores

In the life of an author, one of the best days is the day a new book is released. Today is that day for me. 

I’m feeling awesome and would like to thank Cheryl Kaye Tardif and Imajin Books for suggesting I write this book and for publishing it.

My trek to visit as many non-bookstores as possible led me to sell more books to non-bookstores than bookstores, so I took photos throughout the journey.

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The best moment during the pre-release phase:

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Who wouldn’t want to be placed beside the “nice” shark, Robert Herjavec?

If you’d like to buy the book it’s available at:  AmazonKoboGoogle Play Also on iBooks

Thanks for reading…

Farley’s Friday: Snowmakers Rock!

Farley here,

It’s spring in the mountains, it’s getting hot, but don’t worry about me.

I found the last of the snow made by the snowmakers. It’s won’t be here long, so I have to make the best of it. Cold snow on my back feels awesome.

Kristina even let me off leash after she scanned the area for bears. Sometimes she’s silly. I can smell a bear way before she can see one. And seriously, she’s going to protect me? It’s my job to protect her.

Farley Snowmaker

Just in case you hadn’t heard, today is the LAST day Kristina’s book is on sale for $0.99 USD. Tomorrow is the official release, so I’m guessing there will be a party in our house.

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Write Better Fiction: Do Scenes Per Chapter Matter?

Today on Write Better Fiction we’ll cover Scenes Per Chapter. Write Better Fiction is a process to help you critique your own manuscript and give yourself feedback. This will help you improve your novel, so you’re ready to submit it to an editor.

Last week we talked about the number of words in a scene. Today, I’m going to share how I look at the number of scenes in a chapter.

A scene or several scenes will make up a chapter. The Scenes Per Chapter report will illustrate the structure of your novel based on scenes in each chapter.

An author has two choices. Every chapter can have the same number of scenes, or the number of scenes per chapter varies throughout the novel.

A similar number of scenes per chapter: An author may choose to write chapters composed of exactly the same number of scenes or a similar number of scenes. They create a novel in this format, then they acquire readers, and the readers come to expect the structure throughout the novel. It might be risky for the author to change once they have established a following for their style.

Variable Number of Scenes Per Chapter: You must at least have one scene per chapter. It may only be one word or one sentence but it still counts as a scene. The upper limit is endless.

Potential pitfalls with the number of scenes per chapter:

One chapter with a greater number of scenes than the others: When the reader gets to this scene, he is going to wonder why so much time has been allocated to the scene. Either the author didn’t notice one scene was way too long, or he did on purpose because something very important is happening in the scene.

Switching Structure Mid-Novel: Even if the reader doesn’t register the number of scenes per chapter consciously, they may be jarred out of reading if the first half of the novel is written with the same number of scenes per chapter, and then the number changes. If you choose to have the same number of scenes per chapter, then remain consistent throughout the novel.

You won’t be surprised that I use my spreadsheet to count scenes per chapter and I look for anything that stands out as unusual. I ask myself why I wrote the chapter this way. Below is an example.

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In the above graph, you can see that chapter 3 is very different from the other chapters in the novel. In this case, I would consider breaking chapter 3 into two or more chapters.

The first and last chapters are very few scenes. The first chapter has only one scene. I did this because I want the reader engaged quickly and this helps keep the pace fast. I sometimes end a novel with only one scene in the final chapter. This is the chapter that comes after the climax, so I want to close things up but I don’t want the story to drag on.

As with word count per scene, this type of analysis is done when an author has finished the first draft. It’s a bird’s eye view of the structure and allows me to check the pacing and flow of my story.

I critiqued DESCENT, BLAZE and AVALANCHE using the techniques I’m sharing in Write Better Fiction, and I believe this helped me sign with a publisher.

Please let me know in the comments below if you examine your scenes per chapter and why you do this?

Thanks for reading…

Marathon to 1 Million…

Who said running a Thunderclap campaign is easy?

I saw a post on twitter today that said, “There is no elevator to success…take the stairs” and it resonated with me. I’m climbing the stairs to 1 Million shares.

So what is Thunderclap?

Thunderclap is a crowdspeaking platform that helps people be heard by saying something together. It allows a single message to be mass-shared, flash mob-style, so it rises above the noise of your social networks. By boosting the signal at the same time, Thunderclap helps a single person create action and change like never before.

Here’s where I sit on my campaign.

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I love it if you’d join me on the stairway to success and help me get to 1,000,000 shares. All you need to do is click here.

Thunderclap does the rest.

If you want to learn how to create your own Thunderclap campaign, check out BOOM. How To Create A Successful Thunderclap Campaign

If you do create a campaign, let me know and I’ll support it.

Thanks for reading…

Mystery Mondays: Janice Spina on Genres

IMG_1714Another fabulous Mystery Monday guest is here to talk to us about genres.  Janice Spina is the author of Hunting Mariah.

Hunting Mariah: An insane killer, obsessed with blood and death, seeks revenge with those he perceives wronged him. He is now on the loose. His next victim may be Mariah. Mariah has lost her memory. Will she remember what has transpired in her past? Can Mariah escape this deadly killer’s grasp? Will she finally be safe? Will the killer be apprehended?

Now don’t you just want to read this book? I certainly do!

So here we go to Janice’s writing advice…

Writing in Different Genres by Janice Spina

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How important is it for authors to be able to write across genres? 

First of all, not everyone cares to write in multi-genres. There are some who choose to write in one genre and for select readers. There is nothing wrong with writing in one or multi-genres. Who am I to tell anyone what is the right thing to do. 

If you look at J K Rowling, for instance, she has excelled in writing for YA, PT, MG groups (young adult, preteen, middle-grade). She has also written for 18+. I am one of her biggest fans for the first group but I did not enjoy the 18+ mysteries as much as the Harry Potter series. That does not mean that her books didn’t sell well! On the contrary, once she became established as a successful author anything she wrote (even under a pen name) sold off the shelves. If only I could do that! Sigh!

I chose to write in different and multi-genres to keep myself fresh. I started out with children’s books, ages 0-8, then branched out to MG and PT, ages 9-12, then 18+. I have received a Silver Medal from MOM’S Choice Awards for one children’s book, Lamby the Lonely Lamb, and recently my first book of Davey & Derek Junior Detectives Series, The Case of the Missing Cell Phone, won the Pinnacle Book Achievement Award in the Preteen Category. These awards make an author feel that maybe she is doing something right. I am definitely enjoying what I do.

 Trying out different genres gives an author an idea what feels comfortable to him/her.

You may never know what you excel in if you do not try something different. I have found that trying out different genres opens my eyes and mind to more creative thinking. Also, I discovered that MG, PT and YA are my favorites. When I write for this age group I feel like a kid again.

Since I write off the cuff I never know what my characters are going to say until they tell me and where they are going until they take me there. I find this thoroughly enjoyable. I am reading along as if I am a new reader. It can be disconcerting at times though because I don’t always want to say what the characters want to say or go where they want to go. I then need to take charge and control this story before it gets out of control. It does take more editing this way but it helps me to be more creative and real.

It really doesn’t matter what genre you write in as long as you love what you do and do it to the best of your ability. There are many people out there in cyber land that will lend you a hand if you need it. I, for one, promote fellow authors on my blog. Go to http://jemsbooks.wordpress.com for more info. 

For now, writers, authors and prospective authors keep on writing and creating beautiful books from your hearts. You readers out there, we need you. For without you we wouldn’t have a reason to write!

 Please keep on reading and reviewing and remember: READING GIVES YOU WINGS TO FLY!

Thank you, Kristina Stanley, for having me on your marvelous blog! I had a wonderful time!

All my books (Jemsbooks) can be found on –

Http://Amazon.com/author/janicespina7

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http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/Janice-Spina?

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 Blessings to All!

Janice Spina

Http://jemsbooks.com

Janice’s Biography:

Janice SpinaJanice Spina is an award-winning author with ten published books and more on the way. She loves writing in different genres, children’s (PS-grade 3), middle-grade/preteen (grades 4-7), and 18+. She is also an avid reader/reviewer, blogger, copy editor and writer of poetry. Her husband illustrates all her children’s books and creates beautiful covers for all books.

She has been writing since the age of nine in the form of poems and greeting cards. She plans to continue as long as she is able to create stories for all ages. Her logo is Jemsbooks for all ages, and her motto is Reading Gives You Wings to Fly!

Janice’s children’s book, Lamby the Lonely Lamb, received a Silver Medal from Mom’s Choice Awards and her MG book, Davey & Derek Junior Detectives, Book 1, The Case of the Missing Cell Phone, received the Pinnacle Book Achievement Award in the category of Preteen books.

Janice lives in New Hampshire with her husband, John, and enjoys traveling, going to the movies, reading, hula hooping, walking, crocheting, blogging, and spending time with the grandchildren who are her inspiration to write.

She loves to hear from her readers and looks forward to new reviews of her books. She is a staunch supporter of fellow authors and features them on her blog. Get in touch with Janice by email jjspina@myfairpoint.net or through her blog and website.

Farley’s Friday: I’m Sooooooo Happy

Farley here,

Run, bark, swim, roll, chase, and bark some more.

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I love the beaches in Victoria, BC. I met new friends, some big, some small. All playful.

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Somewhere along the beach, I rolled in rotting seaweed! I left let beach filthy, but happy. Oddly enough, Kristina didn’t like the smelly seaweed part. Go figure…

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