Farley’s Friday: Are Ponds Dangerous? Part II.

Farley here.

Sometimes in life, a dog needs help from his friends. I want to impress my girlfriend Jesse with my jumping-in-pond skills, but I can’t do it alone.

Along comes my pal, Flint. He’s a Portuguese  Water dog, and he’s less than a year old. But he is braver than me. Also, he has ‘water dog’ in his title, so that must mean he is genetically meant to swim.

I put my front paws in the pond. Flint Nudged me. I put my back paws in. He nudged me again.

“This isn’t so bad,” I bark at him.

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He woofs, then barks in my ear, so only I can hear. “Dude, you actually have to swim if you want to impress the girl.”

I shake my head. No way. I’m not ready for that. Maybe tomorrow.

Flint has an awesome human. She carries cookies, so as a reward for my bravery, I get one.

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Flint may be the better swimmer, but I’m the better sitter. Look how handsome I am waiting politely for my cookie. Now check out Flint. He got too excited and jumped for his. Of course we had to wait until he settled down before we got cookies. Maybe I can trade teaching him how to sit for him teaching me how to swim.

His human is the kind who loves dogs. She’ll do anything for us, including giving us cookies after Flint got her all wet.

Ponds are still dangerous, but not as scary as they were last week.

Woof Woof.

Camp NaNoWriMo: Did it work?

For me, Yes .That’s a big YES. I completed my 50,000 words today.

It may seem like a little thing to get a winner’s badge. but it’s what’s behind the badge that’s important. There are 50,000 words of a novel.

So why did this work for me?

Watching the daily word count motivated me to write every day. It’s so easy to miss a day or two, and not get the words written. But just being accountable to my camp members was enough.

The other thing I found is my friends and family gave me time to write, knowing I was under a deadline. The closer I got to 50,000 words, the more they cheered me on. The excitement around here grew each day. That motivated me to keep going, too.

Here’s what my word could looked like on a daily basis.

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You can see I fell behind on days 8, 9, and 10. Those days fell on a weekend, and life took priority. At that moment, I knew I had to get more serious and bump up writing on the priority list.

Would I do NaNoWriMo again? Yup.

I’m going to participate in November. In the mean time, I’ll start keeping track of my word count to help me focus. I’ve got to get this novel to 80,000 words before September. Then I need a month to edit it before sending it to beta readers. After that, November is closing in, and it all begins again.

Anyone else our there in Camp NaNoWriMo? How are you doing? What did you like or not like about the camp? I’d love to hear your thoughts.

Thanks for reading…

Mystery Mondays: Kathleen Burkinshaw

Today, I have the pleasure of welcoming author, Kathleen Burkinshaw to Mystery Mondays. It’s a special week for Kathleen. Her novel, The Last Cherry Blossom, is being released in one week. But don’t worry, you can pre-order it now on amazon. Let’s help her celebrate, by welcoming her in the comments below.

Following the seventieth anniversary of the atomic bombing of Hiroshima, this is a new, very personal story to join Sadako and the Thousand Paper Cranes.

Last Cherry Blossom_cover (2)Yuriko was happy growing up in Hiroshima when it was just her and Papa. But her aunt Kimiko and her cousin Genji are living with them now, and the family is only getting bigger with talk of a double marriage! And while things are changing at home, the world beyond their doors is even more unpredictable. World War II is coming to an end, and Japan’s fate is not entirely clear, with any battle losses being hidden from its people. Yuriko is used to the sirens and the air-raid drills, but things start to feel more real when the neighbors who have left to fight stop coming home. When the bomb hits Hiroshima, it’s through Yuriko’s twelve-year-old eyes that we witness the devastation and horror.

This is a story that offers young readers insight into how children lived during the war, while also introducing them to Japanese culture. Based loosely on author Kathleen Burkinshaw’s mother’s firsthand experience surviving the atomic bombing of Hiroshima, The Last Cherry Blossom hopes to warn readers of the immense damage nuclear war can bring, while reminding them that the “enemy” in any war is often not so different from ourselves.

My Personal History Behind The Last Cherry Blossom by Kathleen  Burkinshaw

Growing up I remember an 8 x 10 elegantly framed black and white photo of my mom sitting with her Papa. She was about 4 years old and dressed in a kimono while her Papa was wearing a yukata (casual summer kimono). My mother treasured that picture. It was one of only a handful she had from her childhood. Those photos were also taken when she was about 4. She didn’t have any of her older than that. Other family pictures were all destroyed, along with her home, the day the atomic bomb was dropped on Hiroshima. She only had these few pictures because they were at a cottage they vacationed at in the country. That picture is what inspired me to write about the relationship and love my mom had with/for her Papa.

During my daughter’s elementary school years, I went to her class each year, read a picture book about Japanese culture, and we would do a Japanese craft related to the book I read.

When my daughter was in seventh grade, she told me that her class’ section on WWII would be ending that week, and she overheard some students talking about seeing that ‘cool picture of the mushroom cloud’. She asked me if I could talk about her grandmother and all of the people who were under the now famous mushroom cloud. That question inspired me to present my mother’s experience on August 6th to middle/high school students.

When I was younger, my mother told me what she lost that day in August. But she never gave me any specific details of this event. Her memories were still too painful to discuss.

After my daughter’s request, my mother decided she was ready to tell me more of what had actually happened on the most horrific day of her life. She hoped by sharing her experience, students would realize that the use of nuclear weapons against any country or people, for any reason, is unacceptable.

The following year, my daughter’s previous teacher requested that I present to her history class and to the entire 7th grade at the school. I phoned my mom and asked more questions about her life at home during the war before August 6th. A week later a copy of her favorite picture with her Papa arrived in the mail. That’s when I knew there’s a story here, not just of horror and loss, but of love, and joyful family memories.

My daughter is about to begin her second year of college, and I continue to visit that seventh grade class at her old school. Over the past six years I have added other local middle schools to visit. Each year the students who have heard my non-political presentation, expressed their gratitude to my mother for sharing such a personal, traumatizing memory. Teachers included my presentation in their history curriculum because they felt that the lecture gave students new insight into how children lived during the war. And more importantly, students learned that the Japanese children had the same hopes and fears as the children in the Allied countries.

Teachers, friends, my family, and most importantly my mother encouraged me to finish writing The Last Cherry Blossom. I wanted to write this book not just to honor my mother and her family, but to honor all the people that suffered or died from the effects of pika don. I want readers to know that the victims were all someone’s mother, father, brother, sister, or child.

Originally, scientists said nothing would grow again in Hiroshima for many years after the bomb was dropped. Yet the cherry blossoms bloomed again the following spring. The cherry blossoms endured much like the spirit of the people affected by the bombing in Hiroshima, much like my mother.

The Last Cherry Blossom publishes one week after this post! It’s a bittersweet time. My mom passed away in January 2015. However, she did read the latest draft (at that time) of the manuscript and knew it was going to be published. Her elegantly framed, treasured photo now has a prominent place in my home.

Last summer my family visited Hiroshima to honor my mother at the Hiroshima National Peace Memorial Hall for Atomic Bomb Victims. Standing on the same ground where she experienced so much loss and destruction when she was only twelve years old, broke my heart.

My mother lost so much that fateful day, yet she gained an inner strength she never thought possible. Whenever I look at the picture of my mom with her Papa, and when I think of all the love she had given my daughter and myself, I’m reminded that love prevails over fear.

 

WHO IS Kathleen Burkinshaw?

Burkinshaw, Kathleen wnbaKathleen Burkinshaw resides in Charlotte, NC. She’s a wife, mom to a daughter in college (dreading the reality of being an empty nester-most of the time), and owns a dog who is a kitchen ninja.  Kathleen enjoyed a 10+ year career in HealthCare Management unfortunately cut short by the onset of Reflex Sympathetic Dystrophy (RSD). Writing gives her an outlet for her daily struggle with chronic pain. She has carried her mother’s story her whole life and feels privileged to now share it with the world. Writing historical fiction also satisfies her obsessive love of researching anything and everything.

You can connect with Kathleen on twitter @klburkinshaw1

or find her on her website or at other fun sites…

Farley’s Friday: Are Ponds Dangerous?

Farley here,

My friend for life, Jessie, is staying across the street for a month. That means daily play dates.

What is also means is I have to “up” my game. I’m the cool mountain dude. I chase bears up trees. I face down aggressive deer. I keep squirrels off the deck.

But leaping into a pond where the water is over my head?

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I don’t think so. Emily, Jessie’s human, is trying to coax me into jumping in the pond. Just at the edge of the photo you can see a green ball floating on the water. What you can’t see is that it’s floating toward me. If I wait long enough, it will come to me, and I won’t have to get wet.

When the ball gets close enough, I’ll grab it.

Alas, that was not to be. Jessie jumps over my head into the water. She swims to the ball, grabs it in her mouth, swims back, and gives it to Emily. All I can do is wag my tail and look cute.

Why am I afraid of water that’s over my head? That’s a story for another day.

Any ideas on how I’m supposed to impress Jessie if I won’t swim?

Woof woof.

Camp NaNoWriMo: Is It Working?

Phew, I’m over half-way through Camp NaNoWriMo.

So what have I discovered? I tell you after I share my stats from yesterday with you.

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That bull’s eye is very motivating. Each day I see the arrow move a little bit. I almost wish I’d set the target at 80,000 words. Almost. That would mean I’d have a full novel drafted by the end of the month. Wouldn’t that be nice?

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The graph show I had a little slump from day 7 to day 10. What’s my excuse? Too much time socializing with friends who were visiting for the weekend. So a person have to have a social life too. Right?

I’m on track to finish my 50,00o words by July 29th. I’ve got to keep to that. I can’t give myself until July 31st because we have friends coming to stay for the long weekend, and I’m also selling books at a Farmer’s Market on the Saturday. Counting on having time to reach my goal over the final weekend would be a mistake, so I’ve got do have 50,000 words by July 29th.

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I’ve never written to a schedule before. I find it adds a bit of stress to the day. I wake up thinking “what if I can’t find anything to write about today?” So far that hasn’t happened. I’m trying the trick of ending a day of writing with only the first paragraph of the next scene written.

I find it easier to decide what comes next if I’m in the throws of writing. If I start the morning with no plan, I have more trouble getting going, and hence it takes me longer to reach the daily word count.

Anyone else out there doing Camp NaNoWriMo? If you are, let me know if the comments below. I’d love to hear how you’re doing.

Thanks for reading…

Mystery Mondays: James Osborne

Today, it’s my pleasure to welcome award-winning author James Osborne to Mystery Monday. Welcome, James. For something a little different, I’m interviewing James. Hope you enjoy our chat.

JO: Thank you for the invitation, Kristina. It’s a privilege to join you.

KS: To begin, can you tell us what motivated you to become a writer?

JO: I suppose it started one winter when I was a kid; I read a 2,000-page encyclopedia.

KS: Really? You’re not kidding, are you?

JO: Not at all. At the time, my parents owned a wilderness farm. We had little money. I was about eight one cold winter and wanted something to read in the evenings. The choice was between my mother’s romance novels and a huge Columbia Encyclopedia. As you might imagine, romantic stories don’t interest a pre-pubescent boy. So I spent the winter thumbing through that enormous, illustrated encyclopedia. I learned a lot of interesting things. But most of all, I gained a lasting thirst for learning and an attraction to reading.

KS: So how did you go from that unusual literary beginning to writing three books that won international awards?

JO: I must confess that early in my working career, writing was not the goal, but rather a means to an end.

KS: How so?

JO: I was an investigative journalist. My motivation was informing the public about important issues. Writing was just a means to that end. But I soon came to enjoy creating images that the magic of the English language makes possible. So journalism served me in two ways: instilling a love for writing, and providing me with learning experiences that became resources for my books.

KS: I understand your debut novel last year grabbed quite a bit of attention on Amazon.

Screen Shot 2016-07-16 at 9.10.34 AMJO: Yes, I was delighted and a bit overwhelmed. Within a few days of its release in June 2015, ‘The Ultimate Threat’ became an Amazon best seller. Perhaps it’s the novel’s premise that grabbed everyone’s attention. The plot anticipates what could happen if ISIS was ever to establish a foothold in North America.

KS: I saw some stories in the news media recently about your books winning those international awards, in fact, I believe it was a hat trick of awards. Please tell us about that.

Screen Shot 2016-07-16 at 9.11.52 AMJO: It was extremely flattering to have my books win a first, a second and a third place in that competition. It’s one where readers from around the world vote on their favorite books. The poll is run by a non-profit organization called Preditors & Editors, so they have no hidden agendas. The group’s primary role is to provide resources for readers and to support writers. The readers chose ‘Encounters With Life’ as the Best Short Story Collection of 2015. ‘The Maidstone Conspiracy’, won second as Best Mystery Novel of 2015, and ‘The Ultimate Threat’ came third as Best Thriller of 2015.

KS: That competition also delivered you an added surprise, is that right?

JO: Yes indeed! Without asking, someone nominated me in the Best Author category. Evidently, there were thousands of authors nominated. I was hugely surprised and deeply honored to be awarded second place. First place went to an author from the US, and third was awarded to a British author.

KS: What other experiences have influenced your writing.

JO: Quite a few actually, and I’m grateful for them. My working life was varied. I’ve served as an army officer, a teacher, worked in product promotion and marketing, was a corporate executive and for 10 years owned my own business. Those various careers provided many valuable experiences, both for my novels and my short stories.

KS: Short stories seem to be outside the mainstream of your primary genre, yet they’ve won you some major awards.

JO: True. As much as I love writing novels, I have to admit that writing short stories is a form of recreation for me. Seriously. I’ve written somewhere around 110 short stories. I’m not sure. I’ve lost count. Writing short stories gives me a rest from working on novels yet it helps to stimulate my thinking about them. And yes, I’m pleased that some of my short stories have received awards. Several of them have appeared in anthologies, both in print and online. Samples are posted on my blog, http://www.JamesOsborneNovels.com.

KS: What’s next? Can you tell us what you’re working on now?

JO: Sure. Readers of both ‘The Maidstone Conspiracy’ and ‘The Ultimate Threat’ have been enquiring about sequels to both. As you know, Kristina, from your own exceptional bestseller getting responses like those from readers is very encouraging and at the same time, humbling. So, I’m pleased to tell you that sequels for both are in process. I enjoy working on simultaneous projects—it’s stimulating. And perhaps that’s why I’m also finishing up work on a second volume of short stories. The plan is, when finished it will become volume two of ‘Encounters With Life: Tales of Living, Loving & Laughter’.

KS: Before we close, would you tell us what writers have influenced you most in your writing career?

JO: Dozens of them. It’s a very long list, Kristina. I’ve read thousands of books over the years. Writing styles and plots designs are what I find most attractive. Perhaps that’s why my tastes cross many genres. A partial list of authors from the near and distant past that I admire would have to include: Charles Dickens, Leo Tolstoy, James Michener, Ernest Hemingway, Ian Fleming, Zane Grey and John Steinbeck. More recent authors on my hit parade include Dan Brown, Clive Cussler, Robert Ludlum, Nelson De Mille, Len Deighton, Jeffrey Archer, John Grisham, Tom Clancy and Michael Creighton. I could add at least a dozen more names to each list.

KS: Thank you, James, for taking the time to join us on Mystery Monday’s.

JO: It’s been a pleasure, Kristina. Thank you so much!

WHO IS James Osborne?
March 2005.JPGJames’s working career began in journalism and then teaching journalism, after which he took a detour through the corporate world before returning to writing. That detour included becoming vice-president of a Fortune 500 company — a mixed blessing — and then president of a management consulting firm for 10 years. Those experiences made clear that a varied life, filled with a diversity of good and occasional not-so-good experiences, provides a huge resource for creative writing.

You can find out more about James’s novels at https://jamesosbornenovels.com

 

Farley’s Friday: One Dog’s Magical Healing Powers

Farley here,

I lay on the cold tile in the basement, my favorite spot when I’m hot, and felt something was wrong. Humans need to be taken care of, and that’s my job. Kristina was in the house somewhere, and I could tell she wasn’t happy.

I trotted up the stairs and found her curled up on the couch. She had a headache. I snuck up beside her and snuggled. I breathed in and out, matching my breath to hers. I shared my body heat.

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Soon her breathing softened. I sent her my best dog vibes, and they worked. I stayed with her until her headache disappeared, and then she took me out for a 5 K hike. She rocks.

I love my human.

Woof Woof.

 

Camp NaNoWriMo: 50,000 words in 1 month?

This year, I decided I would participate in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) in November. When I checked out the process, I discovered there is such a thing as Camp NaNoWriMo that happens in July.

As far as I can tell the only difference is that in July, the participating author can select the word count. In November, everyone tries to write 50,000 words in a month.

For Camp NaNoWriMo, I chose 50,00 words just to see if I could do it.

Here are my stats from yesterday:

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I’m usually a panster, but writing 50,000 words in one month without an outline seemed intimidating, so before July 1st, I created an outline. Each day I write from the outline instead of having to come up with an idea.

Here are the projections:

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I have to say, the process is motivating me to write. I’ve never written to a word count before, and it’s amazing that just by publicly saying what my word count goal is, I find the time magically appears when I can sit down and write.

So can I make it? I’ll let you now…

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Now I have to get back to writing and put 1,529 words on the page today.

Thanks for reading…

 

Mystery Mondays: Ann Morris on Using Mystery in Children’s Books

Today on Mystery Mondays we have Ann Morris. She’s sharing her experience with Children’s Books. She’s tackling a subject we haven’t covered yet, so get ready for an interesting read.

Ann (Ana) Morris on Using Mystery in Children’s Books

Screen Shot 2016-07-04 at 10.32.10 AMThank you, Kristina, for inviting me to guest blog for you today. It’s an honor for me.

Who likes a good mystery? Many of us do. A good mystery maintains interest and allows the reader to speculate and test his/her deduction skills based on the clues given. I’ve always loved a good mystery.

How many of you have thought about children liking mysteries? Not the scary ones. Children are dipping their toes in the waters of reading, and dangling a carrot before them to keep their interest may be an excellent way to encourage their continued love of reading.

Children are by nature curious and love to explore. Many things are a mystery to them that we take for granted. How many of you remember the years of “What’s that?” asked of everything in sight? Or, “Why?”

Those are the early examples, but as children grow, so does their curiosity.

When I was about seven years old, a friend of mine and I shared curiosity for the destination of a stairway that descended from the street near our houses. One day we decided to explore it. We descended the stairway and found ourselves in a huge parking lot that belonged to a huge meat-packing plant.

We knew Hormel was there. We smelled it often. There was a lot of space, so we continued to walk. Of course, we hadn’t considered that anyone may miss us since we had begun this adventure spontaneously.

My parents at that time had only one car, so my mother couldn’t look far for me. She was beside herself with fear. My friend Liz and I were not afraid. We were on a hike. As Mom frantically called neighbors and physically started looking for us, she learned that someone had seen two little girls following that staircase.

She asked neighbors until she found one that we both knew with a car. Mr. Brown. Greg Brown’s dad (another neighborhood friend of mine). As Liz and I walked around and noticed the space with awe, a car pulled up beside us and the gentleman addressed me by name. I looked at him, and he told me he was Greg’s dad. I then recognized the car. (This was the late 1950s, early 1960s, when that was possible.)

Mr. Brown told me my mom was very worried and had sent him to bring us home. He asked why we were down here? We sincerely answered that we were on a hike. We wanted to know where the stairway led.

He reasoned with us, and we got into the car to return home, without satisfying all of our curiosity, but having a safe ending. Of course, my mom was very glad to see me safe, and I was promptly grounded from leaving the yard, but it was the curiosity that drove us.

In my children’s books, I always seek a “carrot” to keep the interest of my readers. My stories are usually based on true stories. Sometimes I need to create the carrot, but my very first book, “Mommy and Mikel Go for a Walk”/”Mami y Mikel dan un paseo” is as true as can be, written about twenty-five years after the adventure. My son (Mikel) has always been curious and fearless. This particular day during my limited vacation days, we went for a walk in the nearest park. It had a path that lead to a lower area with bike paths. I included the observant safety measures that I know my own mom would have loved to be able to use.

We encountered birds, plants, flowers, and Mikel had questions for all of them. They were teaching moments for me, and he was happy to have immediate answers. Finally, Mikel saw an animal in the river that I didn’t even know how to identify. Bingo! Our mystery!

Of course, he would have been happy to jump in the river and ask its name, but I had a safer idea. We went to the library. This was before the Internet, so I took one look at the animal books and decided to move on to something more direct. Fortunately, I had a memory of an uncle who used to raise animals that resembled the one in the water. I merely had never seen one in the wild. The ones I had seen were in cages.

I perused the dictionary which had a photo that looked promising. That led me to the encyclopedias. When I found the animal I suspected in the encyclopedias, I called Mikel to me. He was soooo glad to find an answer to our mystery animal. He remembers that story to this day. He especially remembers that HE was the one who saw the animal first.

It was an American Mink.

That was a children’s mystery and adventure, and it was age appropriate.

Adult mysteries challenge our observation skills, our memories, and our deduction skills. Personally, I love a read that makes me think. I’ve read mysteries that had predictable endings. I prefer the ones that keep my curiosity prime.

I’ve also read mysteries with such tangled plots and so many characters that when I finished the book, I hardly remembered what I had read.

Mysteries need a plot that intrigues, drops clues, challenges the reader yet stays a step ahead of him or her, and has a realistic or feasible ending.

A well written mystery is a gem.

I try to challenge children to safely follow their curiosity and learn about life’s mysteries. Following childlike curiosity with a trusted adult is a safe and healthy way to encourage learning.

Thank you for letting me share a different angle of mystery with you! My website is www.authorannmorris. Feel free to visit my site and answer some of the questions you may now have about me!

And A little more about Ann:

580412_206983096081122_95697604_nAnn (Ana for Spanish books) Morris has a deep interest in education. She knows that children have vivid imaginations and an insatiable love of learning. Morris developed an interest in writing children’s stories with the intention of recording memorable experiences with young family members sprinkled with memories of her own youth.

As a teacher and as a community worker, Morris has collaborated with and served people from many cultures new to our country, including our Latino friends. She speaks and writes Spanish as well as English. Her hopes are to encourage children and parents learning to read their native language, as well as to motivate language learners. She includes a positive adult role model, a curious child and a unique learning experience in each story.

Ann (Ana) Morris is the author of

She has other works in progress and many other memories yet to record.

 

An Author Helping Authors…

That’s my goal.

You can imagine how thrilled I was to see this post on Facebook. Check out the comment on the bottom.

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You can find out more about Keith and his books on his website. Congratulations Keith!

Maybe the AUTHOR’S GUIDE TO SELLING BOOKS IN NON-BOOKSTORES can help you too.

Thanks for reading…