To celebrate, DESCENT is on sale for 0.99 USD on Amazon.com (or equivalent in amazon.ca in Canadian dollars). Why not treat yourself to a present? I think you deserve one.
Find out what happened in Kaln’s life on the day Jack died and in the process you have a chance to win a copy of DESCENT. I’m guest blogging at: http://drusbookmusing.com/2015/12/10/kalin-thompson/ and there is a contest…
My honour this week is to host author Gloria Ferris. As an award winning author, Gloria has valued advice that she’s sharing with us today. But first, a bit about her books.
SHROUD OF ROSES: The Class of 2000 left behind a skeleton in its closet, and fifteen years later someone is coming for the rest of the graduates, including none other than Bliss Moonbeam Cornwall. Against their better judgment, Cornwall and Redfern team up to expose the killer before time — or Cornwall’s talent for stumbling into danger — gets the best of them.
HOT OFF THE PRESS (I’ve always wanted to say that):
What could be better than a week of sipping mojitos, basking in the sun, and listening to waves lap against a Caribbean beach? Nothing, according to Jordan Blair and her friend, Ellie Cassidy. Until their vacation takes a sinister turn…
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5 Tips for Writing a Mystery Series by Gloria Ferris
Every author who writes a series will have found her own truths and tips on what works for her storylines and characters (right, Kristina?). I don’t pretend that my list is comprehensive or will apply to everyone. But, they work for me and might help another writer just getting started on a series.
Don’t info dump everything you know about your protagonist into the first book.
If you’ve planned a series, little secrets and heretofore unmentioned family members can be introduced when you need them. I plan to bring a badass gramma into book 4 of the Cornwall & Redfern series. So far, Gram hasn’t been mentioned and doesn’t need to be.
Yes, your protagonist can be involved in more than one crime in his/her life.
Even murder. What are chances that a young woman in a small town will run across a homicide or other serious crime more than once? Slim to fat, but this is fiction. Readers suspend reality to enjoy the story. When they pick up a sequel, they expect mayhem to rampage through the pages, just like book 1. How many of us think when we pick up the latest episode of our favourite series, Oh no! Another murder? More crime and mystery! Not again!
Me neither. So, throw in another homicide or bank robbery and let ‘er rip.
The love life of your protagonist doesn’t have to be all doom and gloom, or consume her every waking moment. (Be careful of rhyming prose as well, but that’s for another set of tips.)
Watching the mating dance of your favourite cop or sleuth is exciting. It should be incidental to the plotline, a slow blossoming of character development that can be nurtured over the course of several books. But, come on! After book 23 in the series, if our heroine is grappling with relationship issues with the same boyfriend she’s had for 15 years, or still can’t decide between Carlos and Brad, I’m losing interest and even an intriguing mystery won’t pull me back. Move on and show conflict with another character.
You can and should rotate your secondary characters.
Some authors kill off their supporting cast with nary a smidge of regret. How bloodthirsty! And, unnecessary. I love my characters, even the mean, snotty ones with no obvious redeeming qualities. To keep readers from tiring of one of these individuals, I can send him out of town, demote him temporarily to spear bearer, or just mention him in passing. Or not at all. But, he can return for a future episode. When I need suspects or doomed victims, I create them just for that purpose. I don’t mess with my regulars.
Each book in a series should be a separate entity.
A reader should be able to pick up Book 2, or Book 12, in a series and not be lost in time and space. It’s okay for the reader to realize she isn’t reading the first book in a series, but play fair. The ending of each book should resolve the mystery before the next one begins. If you’re writing a serial, state this on the front or back cover.
On a related note, repeat readers will not be offended by brief reminders of the setting and descriptions of the returning characters. This information will firmly anchor new readers in the world you have created for them.
Thanks for having me as your guest, Kristina. I’m honoured to take part in Mystery Monday!
BIO – Gloria Ferris
Gloria Ferris
Gloria Ferris is the author of the darkly humorous Cornwall & Redfern Mysteries. The first in the series, Corpse Flower, won the Crime Writers of Canada Unhanged Arthur Award. The second, Shroud of Roses, was released in July, 2015. Her first paranormal mystery novel, Cheat the Hangman, won the 2012 Bony Blithe Award. Gloria’s mystery suspense novella, Targeted, co-authored with Donna Warner, will be released on November 21st. Targeted takes place in Roatan, Honduras and was planned as the first in a series. The next episode will follow cop/PI duo, Blair and Piermont, as they solve a murder in Old Quebec City.
Gloria began her writing career as a technical procedure writer at a nuclear power plant on Lake Huron’s rocky shores. It was an exciting job, but opportunities for plot and character development were limited. So she turned to crime fiction and found it to be a lot more fun. Now, she has returned to her roots in southwestern Ontario to work on both series, and to dream of finishing the sequel to Cheat the Hangman.
Mystery Mondays began in July 2015 and every week a different author posts about their favourite writing or publishing topic. It’s a chance to showcase your latest novel, engage with new readers and share your knowledge.
Are you interested in guest blogging?
January spots are already full, but I’m taking requests from February 8th onward.
If you’d like to participate, here’s what you need to qualify:
your novels contain a hint of mystery (I’m very lose on what mystery means),
you are a published author – traditional or Indie or any other way that I don’t know about,
you are about to publish and have a launch date within a week of blog post,
you want to promote other authors and spread success,
you write novels with a hint of mystery,
you are willing to engage in the comments section when readers comment on your post.
All I ask from you is that you follow my blog, comment on author’s posts and help share via Twitter and Facebook. If you’re interested send me a message via my contact page.
The guidelines:
You’ll have to send me your bio, back text of your novel, author photo and book cover. I’d like you to write something about yourself, your novel, your research, a writing tip or a publishing tip. Please keep in mind I am a family friendly blog. I do reserve the right to edit anything I think might be inappropriate for my audience, which I will discuss with you first. I think anything under 700 words is great, but it’s your book so up to you.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you and sharing your novel with the Internet world.
Locally owned businesses love to support local artists. The General Store in Panorama is now selling both DESCENT and BLAZE.
The wonderful employees placed both books right at the register where every person who enters the store sees them.
DESCENT and BLAZE at the register.
Billy, the manager, listened to my blurb about the books and what he might say to customers who ask about them, and he put up sign in case more was needed to drive a customer’s eyes to the books .
Books on Beechwood is an independent, locally owned, bookstore in Ottawa, Canada. And I owe them a great big thank you for placing DESCENT on their shelves.
Descent On the Shelves at Books On Beechwood
Being born in Ottawa and spending many years there, I consider the city one of my homes, and having DESCENT selling in one of my towns is exciting.
Inside Books On BeechwoodHow to Find Books On Beechwood
BLAZE will make its debut on the shelves within the next couple of weeks.
If you’re thinking of gifts to buy for Christmas presents, why not a book from an independent bookstore? DESCENT and BLAZE will be waiting to meet you.
DESCENT: When Kalin Thompson is promoted to Director of Security at Stone Mountain Resort, she soon becomes entangled in the high-profile murder investigation of an up-and-coming Olympic-caliber skier. There are more suspects with motives than there are gates on the super-G course, and danger mounts with every turn.
BLAZE: Instead of exchanging vows, Kalin Thompson spends her wedding day running from a forest fire near Stone Mountain Resort, and the pregnant friend trapped with her has just gone into labor. Meanwhile, Kalin’s fiancé, Ben Timlin, hangs from the rafters of a burning building, fighting for his life. Can the situation get any hotter?
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Amazing people. That’s who helped me with BLAZE. Every time I read this list, I smile. I think of all the questions I asked, all the discussion we had, all the critiquing on the manuscript and am truly thankful.
The myth about writing being lonely is just a myth. How could I be lonely with all these friends to assist me? Near the beginning of BLAZE you can find the acknowledgements.
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Mathew, the love of my life, is the person I need to thank first.
A heartfelt thanks goes to my friends for life who read, reread, commented and commented again: Liliana Conn, Michael Conn, Adrienne Cristelli-Stewart, Janice Janczyn, Sue Kreiling, Debi Sarandrea and Libby Simon.
A burning thank you to Calgary firefighters extraordinaire, Chris Ganzewinkel, Billy Stewart.
For expert advice in their fields, thank you to Dr. Rama Behki, Jeff Dodge, George Duncan, Derrick Francis, and Tony Trimble.
I would like to thank Humber School for Writers through which I received feedback from Joan Barfoot and Mary Gaitskill, and Garry Ryan for his support and mentorship through Crime Writers of Canada.
And of course, thank you to Cheryl Kaye Tardif and Imajin Books for believing in me.
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In the modern world of publishing, whether you choose the traditional route or self-publishing, much is expected from an author. Writing a great novel is only the beginning of the journey if you want your work to have a public audience.
BLAZE will be released on Sunday, October 25th, but that doesn’t mean I’m ignoring DESCENT. It’s just as exciting to talk about DESCENT as it is BLAZE, and to be asked to do a reading is an honor I appreciate.
DESCENT is on sale ($0.99 USD) until the end of today, and then it’s back to regular price. You can find it on Amazon.com and Amazon.co.uk.
Last week I did a reading at a senior residence in Vancouver, Canada.
Farley came with me and did his bit to warm up the audience. The big brown eyes and wagging tail did a lot to make people smile. He was pretty happy about the number of cookies he ate.
Now to the tips for delivering a great reading:
The advice is split into 4 sections.
Practice before the event:
Don’t leave practicing to the last-minute. Practice every day even for short periods of time. If you can, read to an audience.
Practice pausing for commas, periods, paragraph breaks, and starting new scenes.
Practice until you can take your eyes away from the words and make eye contact with the audience. This will engage them in your reading. Reading to a mirror will allow you to see if you’re looking up.
Technical preparation:
Don’t staple the pages. Stapled pages are noisy when turned and are awkward to hold in place.
Number your free pages in case you drop them.
Ask how many minutes you have to read. Then prepare for a few minutes less, the exact amount of time and a few minutes more. If other readers don’t show up, you might be given more time. If the proceedings are running long, you might be given less time, Be ready so you can end with a cliff hanger or a dramatic spot that will leave people wanting more.
If you’re reading from printed pages, print in a font large enough to read. Remember the lighting could be dark or there could be glare from other lights. If the font in your printed books is small, you can always print the pages you want to read and place your book in front of you while you’re reading.
Ask what the setup will be. Is there a podium where you can set your pages? Will you be holding a mic? Will you be standing or sitting?
At the event, before you read:
If you’re not first, watch the other readers for what works and doesn’t work. Standing with the mic too close to the sound system can cause feedback, having the mic too far or too close to you mic can make understanding your words difficult.
Have your material ready. Don’t start looking for the section you want to read after you’re at the podium. This distracts the audience.
During your reading:
Once you are on stage, thank the hosts of the event. This will make you look professional and give you time to let your voice and your nerves settle before you start reading your story.
Breathe. This sounds obvious, but breathing will make your speech clear. During the reading, I was so nervous at first, I couldn’t bring air into my lungs. At the end of the first page, when I had to flip to the next page, I moved the mic away from my mouth and took a deep breath. This helped me calm down.
Don’t explain your work in the middle of reading. Let your words speak for themselves.
Only brief the audience about the story if you’re not starting at the beginning.
Speak slowly.
Remember: the audience came to hear you and they want you to succeed, so smile and have fun.
If you have any tips on reading aloud, please share 🙂 I’m always looking for ways to improve.