3 Month Anniversary of DESCENT

My Facebook launch party is set and the date is special to me. BLAZE will be published on the 3 month anniversary of DESCENT.

When: October 25th, 2-4 PM EST

Where:  https://www.facebook.com/events/1630121803934943/

A special group of authors will be giving away their books. All you need to do is join the party, be the first to answer a trivia question correctly, and you win. I’ll announce the author list closer to the date… Can’t give you all the information at one, now could I?

If you want information on how to host your own Facebook launch party, click here. And if you do host one, be sure to let me know. I love attending them.

Early praise for BLAZE is just a thrilling to me as the early praise DESCENT received. The first I received was from Phyllis Smallman.

“Evil in a beautiful landscape—Blaze is an inferno of action and tension. ‪Its sizzling plot will keep you guessing until the end.” —Phyllis Smallman, award-winning author of the Sherri Travis murder mysteries

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If you’re looking for something to read and you haven’t read DESCENT yet, now is your chance before BLAZE comes out. Find it at: myBook.to/Descent

And if you have read DESCENT, I’d be very excited if you pre-ordered BLAZE.

Thanks for reading…

Farley’s Friday: Who chews a purse?

Farley here,

I don’t know what I was thinking. Well, I guess I wasn’t thinking. Look what I did today. I chewed Kristina’s purse. And not just any purse. Her mom gave her this purse, and she loves it.

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She walks into the room. She’s surprised. I never chew anything, so at first she doesn’t understand what’s going on. Then I see the light go on, and she knows I’ve been misbehaving.

She takes the purse away from me, gives me a loving pat on my head, and says, “Really, this is your new thing?”

I wag my tail.

She hugs me.

I lick her face.

She takes me for a walk. She sure is tough with discipline 🙂 Now I just feel guilty. Couldn’t she have been even a little mad at me?

She gave me a starring role in her second novel, BLAZE, and to thank her I try to eat her purse. How do I make this up to her?

Woof Woof.

Mystery Mondays: Brenda Chapman – The Art of Creating Killer Suspense

9781459730960What an honour it is to have Brenda Chapman as my guest today. She’s the author of Cold Mourning,  My Sister’s Keeper, Second Chances, The Second Wife, In Winter’s Grip, Trail of Secrets,  Where Trouble Leads, Hiding in Hawk’s Creek, Running Scared, and When Boomers Go Bad.

Tumbled Graves is scheduled for release on February 27th, 2016. I’ve pre-ordered my copy and won’t that be a nice surprise when it arrives on my kindle in February.

If her list of books is not enough to entice you to keep reading, Brenda is sharing some wicked writing advice today.

The Art of Creating Killer Suspense by Brenda Chapman

Cold Mourning - smallAlfred Hitchcock was a master at drawing an audience into the lives of his characters while ramping up tension. Hitchcock used techniques that crime writers have long recognized as keys to successful story-telling.

The art of creating suspense is tied to an author’s ability to have readers care about their characters. Without first building this connection, the reader is never fully engaged and the frisson of fear or anxiety as the characters face danger cannot be fully achieved. The litmus test for an author is the sympathy we also feel for our characters…and how difficult it is to kill any of them off.

In writing one of my earlier novels, I planned to murder one character, but when the time came, I couldn’t bring myself to do it. Instead, I killed off another character of whom I hadn’t grown as fond, but unfortunately, the book ground to a halt. I had to go back and kill off my originally intended victim. The book ended up being stronger for it, and I eventually got over the loss.

Butterfly Kills coverHow do we make readers care about our characters? For me, the back stories are key: revealing what matters to the characters, their fears, hopes, friends and family. They have to have human failings that everyone can sympathize with and relate to while exhibiting some trait that makes the characters likable. Seldom are people all good or all evil although in crime novels, somebody has to be amoral enough to kill. Revealing what led them to kill can be used to make them human, especially if readers can see themselves in some part of the scenario, although hopefully not the hitting someone over the head with a blunt object bit.

Giving characters difficult or painful secrets is another great way to build tension and draw readers into their world. Officer Kala Stonechild is introduced In Cold Mourning, where I reveal that she grew up in foster care and helped hide a murder when she was ten years old. I take my time filling in her back story over the course of the series, sharing some of her secrets while she works on murder cases and struggles to form relationships. I give the other main characters different but equally flawed personal histories, secrets and troubling dilemmas.

I even share inner dreams and problems for minor characters, who might pop into the story for a chapter. For instance, in the third Stonechild and Rouleau mystery Tumbled Graves, which will be released in early 2016, a long distance transport driver, who is only on stage for one chapter, shares the physical alienation he feels from his family when he is away so much, but also the love he has for his wife and kids that keeps him returning home.

Once the reader cares about the characters and doesn’t want anything bad to happen to them, the time is ripe to add the ticking time bombs—a husband with a gambling problem, a child hooked on drugs, a vindictive ex-lover… The key is to introduce potential problems and slowly twist the tourniquet so that characters and readers are on the edge of their seats, waiting to see what happens next…who makes it to the finish line in one piece.

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Thanks to Brenda for sharing her advice with us.  As a special photo, I’ve included my signed copy of Butterfly Kills.

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Publicity photo 5 2011You can find out more about Brenda and her works at http://brendachapman.ca

Thanks for reading, and please share your thoughts on writing advice or ask Brenda questions in the comments section.

If you’d like to buy one of Brenda’s books, just click on one of her book covers above and you’ll be taken to Amazon.

Farley’s Friday: A Dog Gets Cold Too…

Farley here,

Some of you may know I’m a bit of a softy. Comfort is my thing. Except when my brain turns off and I’m playing.

I went for a little dip in a creek this week, along with three other dogs, so what happened wasn’t all my fault.

The creek bottom was full of black mud, and Kristina wasn’t too thrilled with me.

When we got home, she washed me. But really, did she have to use the outside hose? Couldn’t she have run a bath inside the house?

No, she says. I was too dirty. She shampooed me twice. Twice.

I don’t like to be shampooed, so I tricked her and huddled in the living room and shivered and shook. I wasn’t really cold, but I wanted some love. So what does she do? She wraps me in a towel.

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I think she likes it when I look silly. But I do have to give her credit. She used one of her good towels because all mine were covered with mud 😉

Woof woof.

Call for Submissions: Voices From The Valleys

Are you a writer or aspiring author who is living (or has lived) in British Columbia, Canada?

Screen Shot 2015-09-22 at 7.33.47 AMWould you like to see your BC-based story or poem in print in a high-quality?

Cobalt Books is calling all writers and poets from the interior of BC (or who have spent time there), and surrounding valleys and the Kootenays, to submit a short fictional story, a short creative nonfiction piece (a fascinating true story, well told), or a poem for an anthology in which BC’s recent history, varied lifestyles, rugged landscapes, or stunning natural features play somewhat of a role.

Cobalt Books has enough submissions for the Okanagan Valley but is still looking for submissions from other areas of BC. You can find the full submission guidelines here. Submissions deadline: October 31, 2015.

Why am I promoting this one?

My short story Deirdre Hunting Season has been accepted for publication in this anthology, and I’d love to have other BC authors join me in this venture.

EXCERPT of Deirdre Hunting Season:

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Due to the shortage of deer in the area, our community restricted deer hunting to bucks with four point antlers. The doe in the area needed more males. Well, so did I. I was forty years old, and my buck just married a doe half his age.

The hard part . . . In our small town nestled in the Rocky Mountains, everyone knew everyone. I did the books for half a dozen businesses on Main Street and was known as the accountant with the cheating husband. That’s me. Failure at marriage extraordinaire. I’m a rule follower. I do good deeds. I volunteer. I’ve never even received a parking ticket. So what happened in my life surprised me.

The day mother nature blew the leaves off my tree, I came home unexpectedly. We’d hired a local company to clean our air ducts, and the guy doing the work was supposed to come the following day. He called and asked if I could meet him a day early. I rushed home, even though I was busy, unlocked the front door and headed toward the back of the house. I’d told him I’d leave the kitchen door open for him.

Fifteen years of marriage pin-holed to one moment. A naked woman standing in my kitchen, leaning against my sink, drinking water from my glass.

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The full short story will be published in Voices From The Valleys later this year.

In the meantime, if you’re looking for something to read and you haven’t read DESCENT yet, now is your chance before BLAZE comes out. Find it at: myBook.to/Descent

And if you have read DESCENT, I’d be very excited if you pre-ordered BLAZE.

Thanks for reading…

Guest Posts: Are they valuable?

Guest blogging can be a great way to expand your online network, meet new friends, and share your work with others, but it’s hard work if you want to do it right. I believe anyone who offers me a spot on their blog deserves my full attention, meaning they get a unique blog, my comments during the day to interact with their readers, and shares on my social network, both for my guest post and for other guest posts they host.

Below is an awesome group of sites where I’ll be guest blogging. I’d like to grow this list and am looking for people to  host me on their blog.

If you’re interested, please contact me via my contact information page. I’d love to hear from you and be part of your network.

What I offer:

  • A unique blog for every site that I am a guest on
  • My best effort at driving traffic to the blog via my social network
  • Interaction with the readers of the blogs I guest post on

What I hope to get:

  • New readers
  • Exposure for my work
  • New connections with others online
  • Writing about a topic I love

Here is my current guest blogging schedule:

2015

September 25th Interview with Awethors

October 2, Mysteristas

October 6, Donna Galanti

October 18, Debra Purdy Kong

October 20, Luke Murphy

October 22, Catherine Astolfo

October 25, Chris The Story Reading Ape – This  is BLAZE release day.

October 29, Melodie Campbell

November 2, Judith Barrow

December 18, Judy Penz Sheluk

2016

January 19, James M. Jackson

If you haven’t read DESCENT yet, now is your chance before BLAZE comes out. Find it at: myBook.to/Descent, and of course, BLAZE is available for pre-order in eBook format. Trade paperback is coming soon.

Thanks for reading…

Facebook Launch Party Today 1 PM EST by Kat Flannery

To entice you to join Kat Flannery’s FaceBook launch party for FERN, I’ll be giving away an eBook copy of DESCENT during the party.  For those of your wanting to host your own party, here’s another chance to participate and learn.

Click FERN  just in case you want to read a bit before the party. It is Saturday morning, and what else could be better?

If that doesn’t entice you, I’ve reblogged Kat’s post. Check out what else she’s giving away…

Reblogged from http://www.katflannerybooks.com

It’s Party Time!!!

 Join me for the Facebook Launch Party of

FERN (The Montgomery Sisters Book 1)

Saturday, September 19th at 1:00pm -3:00pm EST.

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two grande prizes of $50.00 Amazon gift cards.
Cheers,
Kat

Farley’s Friday: Recovering Dogs

Farley here,

In order to protect the innocent, I won’t use names today.

I’ve a new neighbour. We play with a stick and exhaust ourselves. He’s gentle in his play, fun to chase, and an all round good dog. But then…the sun shines in a certain way, and I notice something odd.

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“Dude,” I bark, “What’s with your back?”

“The scars?” he barks back.

I sniff his skin but can’t smell anything. The scars are old. “Yeah. They look nasty. Do they hurt?”

“Not anymore.” He gives a little whine as if shaking off a bad memory. “A human poured hot oil on me.”

“What!”

“Not one of my happier days.”

My skin prickles, and I get all agitated. I don’t like this story. “How did you get away?” I bark.

“I ran and ran. And then I came upon a dog shelter. They took me in and then…” he stops barking to pant,  “then, the greatest thing happened.”

He gets distracted by a leaf and runs in circles for a bit.

“What? What?” I bark, bringing him back to the story.

He flops beside me. “Two humans walked into the shelter. The woman said, ‘I love that one.’ And she’s pointing right at me. Can you believe it? I’m covered in bandages. I look pathetic, and she chose me. I instantly love her too.”

“Are they your humans now?”

His tails flops, and there is a shine in his eye. “Forever.”

Woof Woof

PS. Kristina’s new book, BLAZE, is available for pre-order. You can get it at:myBook.to/BLAZEbyKristinaStanley

And here’s a little teaser: I have a big, and I mean big (so I like to exaggerate) role in the book. She even used my name. I’m going to be a famous wheaten terrier.

Who are My Readers: Poll Results

Thank you to everyone who participated in this poll.

I’ve summarized the results here and added my thoughts of what they mean to me.

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I’m happy to see I have a cross-section of readers even though I focus on mystery writing. The “Other” section included non-fiction (2), women’s contemporary, children’s (2), historical fiction (3), young adult (2), flash fiction, saga, memoir, sci-fi, paranormal and blogging. This tells me my blog has enough variety to interest many types of writers, so how could that not make me smile.

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The data above tells me not to focus writing advice on a series just because I write a series. It’s probably a good idea to keep tips focussed on all categories.

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So this one surprised me. I write on a MAC and thought most writers do. Guess I was mistaken her. I don’t think I’ll blog about writing on a MAC much.

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Here again, I thought more writers would use Scrivener. It’s my writing software of choice, and I can’t imaging not using it. I do use MS Word when I submit my work to others.

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Most people filled in the other category here. Using “nothing” was a popular answer, followed by Excel. I use Excel for every novel I write to keep track of details, ask my self pertinent questions about each scene, and to make notes. I wish there was a better way to do this, but I didn’t see any in the survey results.

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This one is nicely balanced. I think many authors, regardless of how they are published, struggle to get the word out about their novels. Mystery Mondays is my way of helping other writers network their art.

Thank you for participating in the poll and giving me lots to think about when it comes to future blogging.

Thanks for reading…

#1 Question to Ask Yourself After A First Draft

You’ve completed a first draft, you look at the mound of papers on your desk, and wonder what next.

How do you look at your draft with new eyes. There is a lot of advice about putting your novel in a drawer for a few weeks before looking at it again, sending it to others for a beta read, reading it aloud etc.

But what if you want to do something more practical and immediate?

For each scene ask yourself: WHAT IS THE POINT OF THIS SCENE?

Try not to answer in a generic way.

An easy answer is: Moves the story forward.

To me, that’s too general. How does the scene move the story forward? Be as specific as you can.

Ask yourself: Does the scene

  1. have an important revelation, clue or red herring?
  2. develop a character? To me this means, does the reader learn something new about a character that is important to a story?
  3. introduce a new character?
  4. show character motivation?
  5. give the reader a break after a high action scene?
  6. give the reader action after a break scene (sometimes called a sequel scene)?
  7. foreshadow, give backstory or contain an important flashback?
  8. develop setting that is important to the story and not just setting for the sake of describing something?
  9. close off loose ends?
  10. solve the crime?

If you can’t articulate the point of  a scene, think about removing the scene.

If the point of the scene is weak, see if you can take what is important in a scene and move it to another scene. Then delete the weak scene.

I use a spreadsheet to keep track of each scene. One column is dedicated to the point of the scene. If a cell remains empty when I’ve reviewed the entire novel then the scene must go.

Please share any tips you can add in the comments below.

I used this technique while writing DESCENT, BLAZE and AVALANCHE.

Thanks for reading…

If you’re interested, you can buy or download a sample of DESCENT at:  myBook.to/Descent