#writetip When you create the world your novel exists in, there are an infinite number of “things” you can describe. A daunting task! How do you choose what to write about and what to leave out?
One technique is to describe what the character cares about. Chances are if the character is interested in the “thing” being described then the reader will be to.
The character might be interested in something if it is relevant to their goal, if it is a danger to them, or if it shows something about their personality.
To show the reader your character cares about this “thing” you can have the character give their opinion in either speech or thought. You can have the character go to extreme to save this “thing.”
If their house was burning down, what would they save? Maybe that’s the “thing” you should be describing.
For everything you describe, ask yourself how what it means to your character. That should get you on way to deciding what in your new world to write about.
As usual, this is what works for me. If you have other methods, I love to hear about them.