Do you have too much detail? #writetip I received a very insightful comment on my second novel from an acquiring editor. Here’s what I got out of it.
When describing “something” in a novel, that “something” should be related to the story. For instance, it is the murder weapon? Then perhaps it deserves a lot of attention.
It is “something” used during the novel, but not key to the plot? Then perhaps a little less detail.
It is “something” not related to the story? Then perhaps remove it.
There is so much to remember when editing a novel. Maybe it’s time I started another spreadsheet.