So you want to put your scene into overdrive? Here’s one way to work on it.
I wanted to know what made this scene speed along like a comet crossing sky.
I reread the scene, looking at each word very carefully. And it seems to me, the verb choice drives the speed.
CJ Lyons uses action verbs. She doesn’t use uncommon verbs that take a reader out of the story, but she does use specific verbs representing movement.
Here are some of them:
You get the idea, so if you think your scene is slow, why not check the verbs and see if they are fast?
What do you do to make your scene rip?
Thanks for reading . . .